Forum Fiction Troubleshooting/Comments Thread

So, presumably we'll be telling the remainder of what happened in the winter, alternating with what happened in the summer?

I'm getting a bit of an AoT vibe from this. Like it a lot.

Yeah, a bit of flashing back and forth was what I was hoping for. There's definitely more to be said about the winter ball.

Drunkalilly wrote:

Yeah,  a bit of flashing back and forth was what I was hoping for.

Keep your night out stories to the relationship mishaps thread.

Cracking piece Buska. I'm presuming the bulk of our story will take place in and around the Summer Solstice. I don't have a solid canon as to what "her" might be, so I reckon I'll leave that alone and focus on the war effort.

Like I said, I've decided on pretty well everything but I'm trying to avoid actually revealing anything. It's more fun to drop hints and let other people do the reveals.

Glad to hear you're gonna concentrate on the battle. I was half - expecting us to gloss over it too much.

Who's next up by the way? With people dropping out/being busy, I'm confused about the order now.

Andyman next, isn't it?

*lights Andy-signal*

Are you ready Andy?

I should be able to knock it up some time tomorrow!

Great! Then am I right in saying with ZJ still busy we're back to me?

That seems to be the way of things!

Just us four at the moment, is it?

Until ZJ rejoins our happy band, yes.

andyman949 wrote:

I should be able to knock it up some time tomorrow!

Which "tomorrow" did you have in mind?  

There is no past and no future, just a shapeless, eternal, ever - changing present.

I spent yesterday catching up (I was a few posts behind before the break) and then I fell asleep crazy early. I'll endeavor to get it up today.

andyman949 wrote:

I fell asleep crazy early. I'll endeavor to get it up today.

We've all been there, brother!

I'm really sorry to let you down guys but I just can't work out what to write. I'm really enjoying reading what you're all writing but mine is sub-standard and I can't help but feel anything I'd add would only detract and create plot holes. Keep up the good work though, I look forwards to reading it!

andyman949 wrote:

I'm really sorry to let you down guys but I just can't work out what to write. I'm really enjoying reading what you're all writing but mine is sub-standard and I can't help but feel anything I'd add would only detract and create plot holes. Keep up the good work though, I look forwards to reading it!

Don't feel like that man! It isn't about quality of writing but more about just making a story together.

I know quality isn't the most important thing but that still doesn't solve my case of writers block! I just can't think of any way to take the story forward annd anything I did add would probably be convoluted nonsense. I'd personally just enjoy it more if I wasn't writing it, I pressure myself too much!

No worries. I'll hopefully have my piece up then sometime over the weekend. I guess that makes us down to 4.

I know that feeling, Andy. While I certainly don't feel that your writing is bad, if you want to take a step back for blocked reasons that's fair enough. It's a shame, but I hope you'll keep reading.

I'll certainly keep reading, this is some good stuff!

That's a shame man! Flag you're still enjoying the read, and if you ever get an idea you would like to write, just let us know. I'm sure we'd all gladly squeeze you in.

Apologies for not having my piece up yet - with E3 and all that jazz I'd forgotten.   

This weekend, for sure.   

Soooo . . ?